Tuesday, November 6, 2012

An Excellent Adventure

About a week ago, I decided to start sitting down each day and writing for at least an hour, using a picture I previously found as my inspiration. Today, I wrote for four hours. This is the result of those four hours.


Mei-Mei sat on her window sill looking out at the bamboo forest on the hills near her house. Something felt different about it today. She thought she saw smoke coming from the top of the hills, but she was certain it was her imagination.
“What should we do today, Fen?” the young girl asked her even younger brother. He scratched his head.
“Let’s go see Bao the panda bear!” he said excitedly. “We can go on an adventure in the forest!” Mei-Mei glanced out the window again; it was a beautiful day outside, perfect weather for an excellent adventure with her two favorite partners.
“Okay, let’s go!” she exclaimed grabbing her shoes. The two siblings ran out the door and towards the forest. Deep in the forest, they found their friend’s bamboo hut.
“Bao!” Mei-Mei called knocking on the door. Fen stood on his toes to peep through the window.
“Bao?” he said as he tapped on the window.
“Fen!” Mei-Mei snapped “Get down! It’s rude to look in people’s windows!”
“It’s quite alright!” a familiar voice said as the door to the hut opened. Mei-Mei beamed, looking up at her old friend.
“Good morning, Bao!” she said as she hugged his big round belly. His soft fur was warm against her face.
“Hi, Bao!” Fen said as he too gave Bao a hug, only coming up to his leg.
“Good morning, children!” Bao chuckled. “Come in, come in! You’re just in time for some jasmine tea.”
The three friends sat around a small table, the sweet smell of jasmine hung in the air.
“Bao,” Mei-Mei said as she sipped her tea. “Did you see any smoke coming from the hills earlier this morning?” Bao scratched at the fur on his belly while munching on a bamboo stick.
“Why, yes. I believe I did. Strange isn’t it?” Bao said looking out the window.
“I thought no one lived in the hills anymore?” Fen inquired.
“Have you two ever heard the story of the old woman who lives down the forest’s haunted path?” Bao asked. Mei-Mei and Fen both shook their heads, so Bao continued.
“It is said that there’s a lonely old woman living at the top of the hill. She longs for visitors so every once in a while; she’ll bake some special desserts in hopes that someone will brave the paths and visit her.”
“Why doesn’t she just come down to the village?” Mei-Mei asked.
“She’s too old to make the journey anymore,” Bao explained. “She can’t defend herself on the haunted paths.”
“How sad,” Mei-Mei said. “That poor woman, up there all alone.” She got up and looked out to the hills where she had seen the smoke.
“Well it’s only a legend.” Bao said as he slurped down the rest of his tea. “Now what is it we’re doing today?” he asked.
“We want to go on an adventure in the forest!” Fen told him. Bao and Fen continued to chat excitedly about today’s adventure as Mei-Mei gazed out the window.
“Come on, Mei-Mei!” Fen called after a while. “It’s time to go!” Mei-Mei tore herself away from the window and followed her companions outside. The trio hiked deep into the forest, telling jokes and fighting off imaginary dragons. Fen had found a fallen branch and used it as a sword.
“Take that! And that! And that!” he shouted, stabbing the air. Bao picked up a bamboo rod and challenged Fen to a duel. The clanging of the wooden rods echoed through the forest as they battled. Suddenly, they came across an old pathway. It didn’t look like anyone had been down it in years.
“W-We should head back.” Fen said nervously. “I don’t like the way that path looks.”
“Yeah,” Bao nodded. “Plus, it’s getting close to lunchtime!” his large stomach growled in agreement. The two turned around and started to head back, but Mei-Mei hesitated.
“Isn’t this the path up to the top of the hill?” she asked.
“Yes,” Bao said. “Which means it’s haunted. Which means it’s all the more reason to turn around.”
“What about the old woman at the top of the hill?” Mei-Mei asked.
“It’s only a legend!” Bao protested.
“But what if it’s not?” Mei-Mei challenged.
“Come on, Mei-Mei. We’re hungry!” Fen whined.
“It’ll take longer to go all the way back than to go just a little further up to the top of the hill. Don’t you want to see if the legend is true?” Mei-Mei said. “And if it is true, there will be special desserts waiting for us, remember?” Bao and Fen looked at each other.
“But….it’s haunted…” Fen said quietly.
“Didn’t you say you wanted to go on an adventure today?” Mei-Mei asked. “This is a real adventure! You’re not scared, are you?”
“I’m not scared of anything!” Fen protested.
“Me either!” said Bao.
“Then let’s go!” Mei-Mei exclaimed, already headed down the path. Bao and Fen followed close behind her, their “swords” at the ready. As the trio went down the path, it got darker and darker. There was a rustling in the distance that caused Fen to jump and grab onto Mei-Mei’s hand.
“It’s alright, Fen.” Mei-Mei said soothingly as she offered her hand to Bao. “It’ll be less scary if we all hold hands.”  Bao took her hand in his great big paw and they continued down the path. The rustlings continued, but Mei-Mei was sure it was just the breeze coming through the forest and ruffling the fallen leaves. They had almost made it to the top, and Mei-Mei could see the end of the trail up ahead when the rustling sound was right behind them. The three turned around and were met by two crystal blue eyes. A white cat was perched on a branch at eye level; it sprung from the branch and rubbed against Mei-Mei’s legs.
“Oh!” she exclaimed. “What a lovely creature! Has it been you following us the whole time?” She bent down to pet the cat’s small head, but it ran off again before she could touch it. Fen, Bao, and Mei-Mei watched as the little white animal bounded down to the end of the path and followed it. When they came to the end of the path, they found themselves on a farm with a small cottage just on the other side of it. Sure enough, there was smoke rising from the cottage’s chimney.
“We made it!” Mei-Mei giggled. “Come on. Let’s go knock on the door!”
“Mei-Mei, wait! What if she’s a demon?” Fen warned.
“Or a monster!” Bao added. Mei-Mei was already out of earshot and nearly on the front steps of the cottage. Fen and Bao hurried to catch up to her.
“Mei-Mei!” Fen called. “Wait! It could be dangerous!”
“Don’t be silly.” Mei-Mei said as she knocked on the cottage door. The door opened and a frail old woman stood in the door frame. When she saw Mei-Mei her eyes lit up and brimmed with tears.
“Oh, I’ve waited years for this day to come!” she said as she beamed at Mei-Mei. “Come in, dear! Come in! I’ve just taken a fresh batch of sweets out of the oven!” Mei-Mei followed the woman inside, quickly followed by Fen and Bao. The cottage smelled of vanilla and cherry blossoms. There were pictures all-around of distant lands and smiling people. The old woman had shelves filled with books and other knick-knacks. Her kitchen was warm and inviting and the table was set for four. In the table’s center there was a basket full of tables. The old woman pulled another tray of cookies from the oven and noticed Fen and Bao.
“Oh, there are two of you!” she said delighted. “And a panda!”
“This is my younger brother, Fen and our friend Bao,” Mei-Mei said. “My name is Mei-Mei.” The old woman smiled.
“My name is Jia-Li,” she said. “I’m so happy you’ve come to see me. I can’t remember the last time I had visitors. Please, make yourselves at home!” Fen, Bao, and Mei-Mei sat down at the table as Jia-Li carefully placed the fresh cookies in the already overflowing basket of sweets.
“I’ll be right back with some tea!” Jia-Li said clapping her hands. I’ve got some fresh herbs in my garden I can use.”  After she was gone, Mei-Mei turned to her friends and smiled.
“See? I told you there was nothing to worry about!” she told them. “And look how happy we’ve made her.”
“I don’t know,” Bao said. “Something doesn’t seem right.”
“You’re just being paranoid.” Mei-Mei said, shaking her head at him. Jia-Li returned with a beautiful tea set.
“Here you are, dears,” she practically sung as she poured the tea. “Help yourselves to whatever you’d like! You must be famished from the journey up here.”
“You have a lovely cottage,” Mei-Mei said as she took two cookies from the basket. “Have you been to all of the places in your pictures?” Jia-Li’s eyes lit up even more.
“Yes, I have!” she said. “I used to be quite the adventurer when I was younger. I’d go all over the world trading precious objects.” Jia-Li went on to tell them about her travels and all the wonderful things she saw. She told them about the ruins in Belize, the pyramids in Egypt, and the hot springs in Iceland. Mei-Mei asked lots of questions that Jia-Li was only too happy to answer.
“Who are all these people in your pictures?” Fen asked as he looked around the room.
“Friends, family, visitors. People used to come by here all the time!” Jia-Li said. There was a bit of sadness in her eyes as she said it.
“Why’d they stop?” Bao asked.
“There was a landslide where the main path up to my farm was. The only other way is through the bamboo forest, but no one wants to come through that way, and I’ve grown too weak to make the trip down to the village.” Jia-Li said sadly.
“Because it’s haunted?” suggested Fen. Jia-Li threw her head back and laughed.
“Yes! But those are only myths,” she said. “The scariest thing about that path is my cat, Mi. However, she makes such a ruckus in the leaves that it scares people off.”
“It didn’t scare us!” Mei-Mei said proudly.
“Well…it scared me a little.” Fen admitted.
“And me!” Bao chimed in.
“But now that we know the path isn’t haunted, we can come visit you all the time!” Mei-Mei added. Jia-Lin’s smile widened.
“Oh, I would love that.” She said. “It’s been so lonely up here. I have the animals to keep me company, but it’s not the same.” Mei-Mei took the old woman’s hand.
“Don’t worry,” she said. “You don’t have to be alone anymore.”
“Oh, I know I don’t.” Jia-Li said with a large grin on her face. “Thank goodness for your bravery or I might have had to have tea alone again. But look at the time! It’ll be getting dark soon! You three should be headed home before it gets too dark. Let me make you a basket to bring home.” Jia-Li stood up, packing up the leftover sweets into the basket on the table. She walked them out to the edge of the farm where the long path back home began. Before they left, Mei-Mei gave her new friend a big hug.
“Jia-Li,” she said “Would it be alright if I came back for tea tomorrow? I’d love to hear more about your adventures.”
“Of course, dear!” Jia-Li said. “I’ll even show you how to ride a horse on one of my mares.” Mei-Mei beamed.
“I can’t wait!” she said. On the way back to the village Mei-Mei looked at Bao and smiled.
“What?” he asked.
“See? Nothing to worry about.” She told him.
“I suppose. She seemed sweet enough. Something just felt strange, though, as if there was something she was leaving out of her stories.” Bao said. They were coming to the end of the not-so-haunted trail when a strange mist came out of nowhere. A figure began to form in front of them. The three stood frozen in their tracks as a man materialized. Mei-Mei immediately recognized him from one of Jia-Li’s pictures.
“W-Who are you?” she asked trying to hide the fear in her voice.
“I am Baojia.” He answered.
“Do you know Jia-Li?” Baojia nodded.
“She was my beloved wife. We had many adventures together until I grew sick and could no longer travel. She took care of me until my passing many years ago.” He said.
“So you’re a spirit?” Fen asked. Baojia nodded again.
“What can we do for you, sir?” asked Bao.
“Take care of my wife,” he said. “She is growing older and has had no one to keep her company for a long time. I fear she may have no one to take care of her when she can no longer care for herself.”
“I promise we will,” Mei-Mei said. “Until the day she passes.” Baojia smiled.
“Thank you.” He said. As soon as he said it, the mist lifted and he was gone.
“I knew it was haunted.” Fen mumbled. Mei-Mei and Bao laughed as they continued walking the rest of the way home. Bao, Fen, and Mei-Mei kept their promise to Baojia. Every day they visited Jia-Li for tea and to help her with chores around the farm. Mei-Mei learned how to ride a horse, milk a goat, and make cheese and butter. Fen learned how to properly harvest fruits and vegetables, chop wood, and give the animals a bath without getting kicked. Jia-Li taught Bao how to make all of the delicious sweets and even her secret family recipes. Five years had gone by when Fen, Mei-Mei, and Bao had learned to properly run the farm. It was a winter evening, and the four friends were sitting around Jia-Li’s fireplace telling stories when Jia-Li asked, “Would you dears stay the night with me tonight? There’s been a howling in the wind recently and I always wake up so frightened. I’d feel much better if I knew you were all here with me.”
“Of course, Jia-Li!” Mei-Mei said.
“I’ll be there with a cup of tea if you wake up.” Bao said with a smile on his face. Fen took the old woman’s hand and squeezed it.
“We’ll be here.” He said.
“Thank you, dears. I’ll make us a lovely breakfast in the morning.” Jia-Li said with a smile on her face. That night, the sweet old woman slept soundly with her three friends at her bedside. Each of them took turns sitting up next to her, holding her hand throughout the night. Mei-Mei had dozed off for a bit on her turn before she was awoken by an icy chill. She blinked as the rising sun shone through the curtains and looked down at her elderly companion. The frail old woman was smiling in her sleep. Mei-Mei beamed at her with admiration and placed a kiss on her cheek, then froze. Jia-Li’s skin was cold as ice. Mei-Mei looked a little harder in the dim light and noticed the old woman wasn’t breathing either. When she realized there was no pulse in Jia-Li’s wrist, tears stung Mei-Mei’s eyes.
“Fen. Bao. Wake up.” She said. The boy and the panda only had to take one look at Mei-Mei to know what had happened and tears began to flood their faces.
“Come on,” Bao choked through tears as he lifted the tiny woman’s body from the bed.
“We need to give her a proper burial.” Fen fashioned a beautiful coffin out of the bamboo from the forest. Bao dug Jia-Li’s grave next to her husband’s under the single cherry tree behind the cottage. Mei-Mei adorned her friend’s body with wild flowers tough enough to beat the cold. They each took turns sharing their favorite memories with Jia-Li and telling their favorite things about her.
“The way her smile warmed you up better than hot tea.” Fen said.
“Her laugh was like the sweetest music.” Bao choked behind his paws. He was trying to make the tears stop, but it was no use.
“The sparkle in her eyes the first time she saw me,” Mei-Mei whispered. “It was like she already loved me.”
The three friends gave their final goodbyes and turned to go in the cottage, but the sight before them kept them frozen where they stood. There, in front of them, was Jia-Li and Baojia. They were holding hands and beaming at the trio.
“Dears,” Jia-Li said smiling her warm smile. “Do not weep for me. I have had a good life and the three of you have given me a precious end to it. My will is in my pillowcase. I’ve left everything to you, my dears. I know you will take good care of this place.” She placed a kiss on each of their heads.
“We will, Jia-Li.” Fen said.
“We promise.” Bao added. Mei-Mei couldn’t speak; she only nodded as tears rolled down her face. Baojia simply smiled at them, and nodded. He took Jia-Li’s hand and the two spirits walked into the forest, down the path that first brought Fen, Bao, and Mei-Mei to Jia-Li those five years ago.

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